Wednesday, February 8, 2017

THESIS & OUTLINE For Compare & Contrast Essay

THESIS & OUTLINE For Compare & Contrast Essay

Outline- *Paragraphs

1. INTRO, Mention both of the websites that will be compared and contrasted during the essay. Include a clear thesis mentioning your overall argument in a well thought out couple of sentences. 


2. SUPPORT - compare
3. SUPPORT - contrast
4. SUPPORT - compare

5. SUPPORT - contrast

6. CONCLUSION- Conclude all your points into one final paragraph that won't leave the reader with any more questions.


THESIS- *After reviewing both websites i compared and contrasted several aspects of the websites * Once i gather all of my support and points i will add them into the thesis to make it clear what it is that i am going to be talking about.

Logical fallacy

a Logical fallacy is a term for something that is logical enough to believe before a argument of exaggeration is lead to undermine the value of the logical subject.
for example, seeing a bear walk on hind legs, then manipulating it to that you seen big foot himself.

     -julian

Logical fallacies

Logical Fallacies

The term is preferred as logic is the use of valid reasoning and a fallacy is an argument that uses poor reasoning therefore the term logical fallacy is an oxymoron. However, the same terms are used in informal discourse to mean an argument which is problematic for any reason.

One example of a fallacy would be like a women saying "All men are pigs because I've been cheated on so many times." It is an argument that is invalid because their arguing something with opinionated reasoning. Keeping you're writing fallacy free will ensure you have nothing but valid points and arguments.


-Thrash D Thrasher



Chapter 11 review summary

In reading chapter 11, I learned that "comparing and contrasting" is used in everyday decision making and observing the benefits and the losses of said objects being compared and contrasted.
As well as how to properly recognize comparison and contrast, establish a basis for comparison, and selecting clear on-topic points you wanna discuss to emphasize on the focus of your comparison and contrast. These are all thing i will do on my health compare and contrast website essay. my thesis for the essay, Muscular dystrohpy affects millions of people world wide, and till this day doesn't have a cure. Nor a viable cause other than hereditary genetics to receive the awful health condition. i will compare the websites of causes and symptoms of muscular dystrophy and the cures and treatments of muscular dystophy to better compare and contrast the many differences and similarities of this health issue.  
          -Julian
                                                         https://www.google.com/search

Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Chapter 11 Reading Review

CHAPTER 11 Reading Response



After reading chapter 11, I learned that comparing two things and also finding their similarities is what this compare and contrast essay is asking for. It also went over editing a comparison -and-contrast essay. Which I find very useful considering rough draft editing is my favorite part of the writing process. You need to make sure you establish a basis for comparison. From there select points of discussion, prepare thesis and start the introduction paragraph. It also discussed transitions which are very important in a compare and contrast argument due to the fact that you are comparing two things directly.

Monday, February 6, 2017

Explanation for essay #1






 I have decided to pick muscular dystrophy. I will compare two of the sites listed below. Muscular dystrophy is a term for a wide variety of inheritable diseases that cause the malfunction and deterioration of muscle tissue. there is no cure currently, but there are treatments to help better pre-existing symptoms. very common in middle aged, older people. rare in infants, children, and young adults.
       -Julian



                                                                                                                             

               












http://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/muscular-dystrophy/basics/definition/con-20021240

http://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/187618.php

https://www.ninds.nih.gov/Disorders/All-Disorders/Muscular-Dystrophy-Information-Page

https://medlineplus.gov/musculardystrophy.html

Health issues assignment Blog post C&C

For our next assignment, i will be writing about Alzheimer's disease. It is a health issue affecting many people as they get older and older. Causing them to forget things and even forget who people are, including family.
For my sources i plan on searching through the following websites until I find all the information i need to write an essay about it. I'll be comparing two websites from the following websites:
http://www.alz.org/alzheimers_disease_what_is_alzheimers.asp
http://www.alz.org/alzheimers_disease_alzheimers_disease.asp
https://www.nia.nih.gov/alzheimers/topics/alzheimers-basics
http://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/alzheimers-disease/home/ovc-20167098

-Thrash D Thrasher

Alzheimer's Disease