Good info, and it was a cute idea to have all the different characters in dialogue about the use of commas. It did need a little tightening as far as length/pace, and some of the character voices were difficult to understand. Good job overall though!
Good info, and it was a cute idea to have all the different characters in dialogue about the use of commas. It did need a little tightening as far as length/pace, and some of the character voices were difficult to understand. Good job overall though!
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